The Pone Wars 1.8: Dressaging Down

I've been portraying Flurry Heart as a slightly cheekier version of her mother, for lack of any real evidence to the contrary.  I expect that on the show (assuming she stops being a baby at some point) she'll end up quite different, but so far no new development on the show has totally invalidated anything I've done, so I'm optimistic

The useful thing about conspiracies is that they excuse all sorts of irrational behavior on the part of the heroes.  The actions of the Jedi don't make a lot of sense in the movie because they take practically everything at face value.  If they went into the situation being reasonably suspicious of everything, their actions would still be strange and more than a little foolish, but would be more along the lines of "I know this is a trap, so I'm going to spring it on purpose" rather than "you're being really dumb in this scene because the script says so".

Of course, a lot of this plot still depends on Twilight having tunnel vision about certain things (I can only change so many things and still tell the same story), but I hope I've reduced the amount of idiot ball passing that appears in the original script.

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